What do you think of this poem? :D?

I love your theme, it is definetly NOT overused, the whole sitting in the cold darkness bit, its new, i like it. However the burning soul thing is a rather overused line, so perhaps find something truly innovative to express your pain and pion other than a 'burning soul'. I like the adjectives on top of adjectives as well such as "yearning steadily still", great imagery, great poem, keep writing!