Can I, May I, write you a lullabye tonight? or just a good night poem? C/C?

I absolutely love the second one. I would think if it defiantly as more of a poem than a song. But it is... uhhh i love it. Everything about it is just beautiful. The only thing i would suggest is that you end it with the "how our life would be" line. It just seems to tie the whole thing together better than the "If only sleep my love good night" lines. But other than that, phenomenal.